Review: Not Saying Goodbye at Gate 21

Review by Tim Jones. Tim is a fiction writer, poet, and editor who lives in Wellington, New Zealand. This review was first published on his blog, Books in the Trees, and is reproduced with his kind permission.

Reviewing books by people one knows and likes is both easier and harder than reviewing books by complete strangers. Easier, because this knowledge might give the reviewer a little more insight into the writer’s work – not that I am claiming any special insight!; and harder, because it is always possible that, despite liking the writer, the reviewer might not like the book.

I’m delighted to report that I don’t have this problem with Kathleen Jones’ latest book, her first full poetry collection, Not Saying Goodbye at Gate 21. I like this book a lot, and furthermore, I liked it more and more as it went on.

If I was asked to say what this collection was about in three words (one of which had to be a conjunction), I’d say ‘landscape and character’. My favourite poems in the collection are those which bring the two together, and since almost all of them do this, I was a happy and engaged reader throughout.

Many of these landscapes are harsh. Kathleen Jones has spent much of her life in Cumbria, in the north of Britain, and many of these poems bear the harshness of that northern landscape, the sense that the flesh over the bones of the earth is thin. But the collection begins even further north, in the glacial north of Russia, where

From the lake’s edge the land seems
to go on forever – beyond politics,
into the impossible distances
of history, where women still

wash their clothes in the stream
and sleep above the stove.

(from ‘Aiming for Archangel: Lake Onega’)

Winter is even more to the fore in ‘Winter Light’, which Helen Lowe recently featured as a Tuesday Poem on her blog, and intimate relationships are described in terms of snow and winter too:

Under the duvet’s white drifts
we trespass unconsciously —

a sleeping thaw that threatens
waking separation.

(from ‘The Silence of Snow’)

Many of these poems feature a woman choosing, or preparing to choose, wintry solitude over warm entanglement – or having solitude imposed on her by circumstance, as in the title poem.

All the same, I think my very favourite poems are those which are not (ostensibly, at least) about the narrator of the poems, but about an external figure. I chose To the Gods the Shades, about a 1st-century Roman occupier of Britain guarding the Empire’s northern border, as one of my Tuesday Poems this week because I admire the way in which Kathleen Jones evokes the man, his times, and the country in which he serves, all in twenty-four economical lines. Not a word wasted, nothing flashy (which would be inappropriate for this poem), everything achieved by the skilled deployment of language. The high point of this poem for me is:

scouring the Tyne gap through this bleak
border town where everything closes at five —

These lines bridge the gap between historical and modern times with the complaint of a cosmopolitan traveller, a complaint such as ancient Roman or modern Briton might equally make.

Not Saying Goodbye at Gate 21 is full of such deft touches. Worth reading, worth re-reading.


Not Saying Goodbye at Gate 21 is published by Templar Poetry, priced £8.99 and available from local bookshops or direct from the publisher.

Kathleen Jones divides her time between Appleby and Italy. Read her recent contribution to our Weekly Poem series, ‘Dixon’s Mill’, here, and find more of her poems on her website.